Bara Amai

[Bara Amai]

NAME:Bara Amai
AGE:17
GENDER:Female
RANK AND DIVISION: Student


APPEARANCE:Amai standing at 5'7 has light brown hair that goes to her waist with golden eyes.Having a decent bust and with some curves here and there.Pale skin with a hint of tan here and there with somewhat long legs.

PERSONALITY:Amai is a pure saint wanting nothing bad happening to her friends.She's kind and caring with hints of protectiveness around.She's 100% loyal and hard-working to the fullest she can be.It is also very hard to make her mad having an innocent and calm personality of hers.Also holds respect to many of her friends.

ZANPAKUTOU: Mikomi shoshite Awai

Mikomi Shoshite Awai consists of the elements:Light,Air,Water,Fire,Earth.Each element is bended to Amai's will.Letting her use them to her needs of protection and health.

Light:Using the sun's light and energy to help restore Amai to good health.Also used for light when needed in dark places.

Air:Using the wind and oxygen to move things and Amai to different places in time of need.Also used for helping someone breath and clear the air of any gas or poison.

Water:Using the particles of water to cleanse things of impurity.Also used to move things when air is unable to do so.

Fire:Using the particles of fire to heat and burn things and people.Also used for melting of iron or steel.

Earth:Using the earth for shields and cages.Also used for moving things and people when both air and water are unable to do so.

HISTORY:Amai lives in a two story house that consists of her younger sister and herself.She is supported by her parents and relatives and her part-time job.Amai goes to school with Orihime,Ichigo,Rukia,Chad and Uryuu.She is also classmate of theirs.They also are friends but Amai mostly hangs with Orihime and Rukia and sometimes Chad.She thinks Ichigo is a little too loud and obnoxious for her and Uryuu is just too distant for her to be friends with.Her little sister goes to middle school and is in 6th grade at the time.Amai has a close relationship with her sister and almost everyday she's at her little sister's school gate ready to walk home with her.At times Rukia or Orihime are with her due to the fact that they are going over to her house.
Amai works at a big time Hotel company thats is all around the world and has a nice fat pay check each week.Amai has a nice decent car[if you call a kia decent] with a small cute license.The garage can hold up to two cars and some unwanted things that won't fit in the house.
Amai happens to live where an attack of new menos are and many shinigamis releasing so much of there power that it lead to the fact she can now see shinigami,hollows,dead people,anncars,and menos along with everything else normal humans are not suppose to see.

OTHER: Amai is classmates with Rukia,Orihime,Ichigo,Chad,Uryuu.Amai also has a kitten named Demeter who she got the name from a English musical Cats.She got the dvd from a friend who had stayed in America for a short time period.And has a Yorkshire terrier named Haru who is black with some brownish gold on his chest,legs, and face.Her kitten is a female calico with the three colors black,tanish brown and white.Also is an awesome drawer,and takes photographs of her friends,nature and the city.

[Occ:Yorkshire Terrier: Haru and Calico Kitten: Demeter. ]

[Suigintou]

I'm afraid this character is much too much like Orihime to be accepted, primarily in her abilities and history. Orihime's ability is pointed out in the manga to be singularly unique, so no one else should be able to do the same things as her. Her history, too, is basically a slightly modified copy of Orihime's, which I can't accept because of the similarities. Also, while her described appearance is okay, the image you are using for her is from another series, and would have to be removed, as we don't allow characters to be taken from other series, including their appearances.

Normally I would decline a human with abilities completely, due to an explanation in the manga that Chad and Orihime's came from interaction with the Hougyoku, but we have something planned to allow a few humans to develop their own powers. It's my own fault for not putting up an announcement for that, sorry! But if you can change her ability to something new and give her a different history soon enough, she can still have abilities, as long as they are unique to her. I'll put up an announcement about human characters, so please read that so you'll have an idea of how she could develop her own abilities and how soon you'll need to have her finished to do so!

[Bara Amai]

Fixed it!:3

[Suigintou]

It does look much better, but her abilities are still basically Orihime's, with animals instead of fairies. I'd love to see something different; humans' abilities are so varied in the manga that there's a lot of freedom to be extremely creative! As for her being friends with Orihime and Rukia, it would be a good idea for you to contact their players about that, since she's not a canon character. I don't think they'd object, but I can't speak for them!

That said, the only other thing I'd suggest is moving the description of her house to other, since it's not really something necessary to her history. I like the amount of thought you've put into her home life, just show us your creativity with her abilities and she'll be good!

[Suigintou]

Approved! <3 Thank you for working with us!